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Every Glance,
Wondering, Thinking,
Is this the end?
Is the curtain falling
For the last act
Of that part of my life?

Letting go,
Is never and easy thing to do,
But sometimes
You have to let go.
Give up, let it vanish
Into the mists of time.

Before that happens,
I must say it
Before I lose the chance.
Say it finally,
Direct to her.
Say hello and goodbye together.
©2008-2010 ~bloodredmonsterman
:iconbloodredmonsterman:

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:iconkrystovarran:
I found the first two verses rather worrying as regards the suicidal implications of them-it felt like listening to Fade to Black. :O_o: The third verse was rather more comforting in that respect, albeit still :( ...

;)

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:iconaliwoo:
That's really amazing... the first two verses could be seen as slightly suicidal but the last makes it more obvious. It's really cool :)

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I'm wild again
Beguilded again
A simpering, whimpering child again

Bewitched, bothered and bewildered, am I...
:iconbloodredmonsterman:
It's not suicidal or anything like that, it's about seeing people or more precisly someone for the last time before we leave school

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Now tell me were have you seen her?
Have you seen hellbender turbulence?

:jarklarge:
:iconbloodredmonsterman:
They could be, I do see where you are coming from but they arn't, read the reply above for it to make sense

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Now tell me were have you seen her?
Have you seen hellbender turbulence?

:jarklarge:
:iconkrystovarran:
Ach, yet more evidence that interpretation of other people's writing is about as subjective a judgement as you can get. =P I'm rather confused about the 'seeing for the last time' things though-haven't we got enough exams the next few weeks?

Unconnected, would you be interested in going climbing Monday afternoon?

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Question Everything!-or don't...
:iconaliwoo:
Okies :) Glad they aren't :)

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I'm wild again
Beguilded again
A simpering, whimpering child again

Bewitched, bothered and bewildered, am I...
:iconbloodredmonsterman:
Not really, thursday or friday Im free though

Yeah we do have exams, but they hadly do any of the ones that I do.

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Now tell me were have you seen her?
Have you seen hellbender turbulence?

:jarklarge:
:iconbloodredmonsterman:
I'm not suicidal in the slightest

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Now tell me were have you seen her?
Have you seen hellbender turbulence?

:jarklarge:
:iconaliwoo:
Good :)

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I'm wild again
Beguilded again
A simpering, whimpering child again

Bewitched, bothered and bewildered, am I...

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